Telling may work well in picture books where space is limited, and writers can leave the details to illustration.
Oral stories, fairytales, folktales, and fables often rely on telling rather than showing because direct messages are more digestible, easier to remember and repeat.
Of course, this flies in the face of conventional wisdom. But conventional wisdom is not always wise.
I take this same approach when I am critiquing or studying some else's work. It is challenging to keep a critical eye when everything moves through you at once.
Here is an example of a Focused Draft list by Jack Gantos, from his book, Writing Radar:
We Are Water Protectors is a non-narrative story. A call-to-action to stop the Dakota Pipleline. But instead of calling the pipeline by its name, Carole calls back to Indigenous folklore and refers to the pipeline by a metaphor, the "black snake." The illustrations help make the connection.
Imagine if she had chosen a more literal direction. It would have significantly less impact on the reader. The cultural imagery is a window into the ways indigenous people develop a connection with nature through stories. Now, the audience can also interact with the story and develop a connection with the cause as well.
"Words are the model, words are the tools, words are the boards, words are the nails."
Consider every word choice carefully, with intention, keeping a goal in mind. What is the purpose of your story? What kind of structure is best suited for the purpose? And finally, what words will best support the purpose?
When you step outside your comfort zone, getting stuck is inevitable. In that situation, it can be challenging to see the forest through the trees, as they say, and you may need someone who is in a position to know where you are at from the 300-foot level and point you in the right direction.
This kind of mentorship, a one-on-one learning model, is probably ideal for every creative person, but it is also tough to find outside of grade school and university. However, that does not mean that you have no other options.
In Real Artists Don't Starve, Jeff Goins challenges common stereotypes. He argues,
"Isolated individuals are not creative. That is not how creativity works."
Creative genius happens in groups. So connect with your peers in a collaborative, non-exploitative way.
Here are a few ways you can collaborate with your peers:
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Not everyone agrees with this approach. In Writing Magic, Gail Carson Levine says that she doesn't have many story ideas. She preaches,
"You don't have to have lots of ideas to be a writer."
Ideas are not precious, so if you are not the kind of person to whom inspiration comes easily, there is no need to worry.
The craft is more important, so is consistency, dedication, and habit. With good craftsmanship, you can make any idea a masterpiece. With routine, you can complete your project and develop skills along the way.
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I can think of several reasons to ignore this step. First of all, Maurice Sendak told me I could.
"I don't write for children. I write, and somebody says, 'that's for children.'" -Maurice Sendak
Second, it is a take on storytelling that requires you to change, adjust, or fix aspects of your storytelling to fit a specific audience and directly address their response to it.
"Storytelling offers the opportunity to talk with your audience, not at them." -Laura Holloway
The practice of beginning without an idea does wonders to release creative pressure. And it is easier than it may seem. For example, you may start to write by taking notes on something you read, summarizing a book, or beginning a journal entry. You may begin to paint by working out the details in the process, clipping textures out of a magazine for a collage, or using a reference image.
One potential pitfall is to search the internet or Pinterest under the guise of looking for ideas. This practice almost always leads nowhere. Instead, do a quick Google search and pull the first image on page 3 as a reference. You could also open a random book from your shelf and blindly put your finger down on the page. Then, use the word or paragraph you found as a prompt.
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Consider the ambiguity of the following sentence:
"I lost my tooth."
We don't have enough information to tell whether or not this is a good thing or a bad thing.
We can use some of the tools above to help convey the tone.
"OH NO, I LOST MY TOOTH!!"
"Good riddance, wobbly tooth!"
"I lost my tooth! It wasn't a popcorn kernel after all."
"The taste of blood and the feeling of a tooth rolling around my mouth like a popcorn kernel, left me without an appetite."
"I lost my tooth! It's my first one."
"I lost my tooth on picture day, and as I sat on the barstool in front of the lights and cameras, I couldn't be happier."
The problem with John Keating, or any other instructor for that matter, is that he forgets his students need to learn the definition first and decide to tear it out for themselves. The journey is essential.
"Do not seek to follow in the footsteps of the wise. Seek what they sought." -Matsuo Basho
The student needs to learn the same way their teacher learned to produce the same results. Otherwise, you end up with lousy poetry—poetry without a sense of purpose or meaning.
The same is true for everything, but in this case, also picture books. Perhaps when we understand picture books better, we can break the limits and explore original ideas with intention.
The Story is Longer Than Fits in 750 Words
The only legitimate reason for writing a long picture book is if it is necessary to convey the concept or story properly. But don't use that as an excuse! Instead, it would be best to refine the story into the most supple, accessible, and precise language you can.
In this case, I think it is also essential to recognize the difference between an illustrated book and a picture book. It has less to do with the word count than the format, but it may be an important consideration. I want to elaborate on the difference in a future blog post. So, I will leave this idea open-ended.
To Vary Qualities of Language
Short word counts are beneficial because they help make the language more accessible to children. In addition, they force writers to communicate more clearly, and while they are not a defining characteristic of picture books, they are a hallmark of the craft.
However, word counts limit the characteristics of storytelling language. And I don't see any reason why variety and exploration shouldn't be celebrated or even encouraged.
You Want to Reach a Particular Audience
Some guidelines align word counts with age group, and while I think that they are helpful to get a general idea of your target audience, I do not give them a lot of thought.
As I said before, short word counts help make the language more accessible to children, but they are not the only factor of language quality or limited to only children. For example, I read and enjoy picture books with no words, very few words, and thousands of words.
I am an attentive reader and listener with interest in all kinds of stories and methods of storytelling. You can also find children who fall into this category, who engage with very long stories even without the ability to read.
On the opposite end of this spectrum is an audience of children and adults who do not enjoy storytelling or have short attention spans.
If you plan to write a longer picture book, you may appeal to children and adults in the former group.
There are many different arguments used to justify longer word counts. Unfortunately, I don't always agree with them all.
They say, "To Create a Multi-Dimensional Story / More Sophisticated Visuals and Humor / More Complex Emotional Dilemmas and Themes."
I say making a picture book longer will not add dimensions or sophistication to it. However, I concede that it is easier for adults to write a multi-dimensional story with more space. Lubna and Pebble by Wendy Meddour is my favorite example of a multi-dimensional story with a meager word count.
I find this comment rather sad. For some reason, people seem to think that short is simple, that children's art is unsophisticated or untalented, that children's books have no depth, and that is not true.
They say, "There is More Time to Savor the Pictures Before the Page Turn."
I say wordless picture books are very slow-paced and offer plenty of time to savor pictures. So, it is clear to me that word count itself does not create this problem. Instead, it is an unfortunate habit where readers turn the page immediately after they read the text.
In the end, the number one reason why you shouldn't write a longer picture book is that it is a lot harder for you and me to break industry recommendations. On the other hand, Brian Floca has a proven track record, and publishers could expect sales.
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